Friday, April 20, 2007
Short Story
I pretty much love horror stories, not the gory, gruesome kind, but the creepy sort that make you tingle in side. With that said, I plan to write a short story, which takes place in the country hills of Iowa during the 19th century, perhaps. It will be about a girl and how she goes about putting the spirits in her home at rest. But will she succeed? Well, I don't know. However, at the end of the story there will be a surprising twist.
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I like the story. I think that your writing is very descriptive and it was a good read. My only suggestion would be to possibly go more in depth with regards to the mom and dad's motives. I know it says they are just evil, but maybe elaborate more and maybe find ways to hint at the ghostness of her friends before the twist, just so its kind of an "ah ha" moment. Good job.
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